Unsigned - Unknown - song i made while bored

This is a song I've made myself. Though it would be hard for anyone to correct it, I would like everyone to at least rate it and perhaps send me a comment about it. Also, if anyone could find the time to perhaps make a bass-part for the song and send it to me, I'd appreciate it. I will be including more as I come up with more, as this isn't the complete song. Standard tuning. Since I can't tell you the way I play it, you'll just have to try out the speed that suits you best. But I usually play this first part in a steady, easy tempo. This would be the "verse". e:--------------|----------------|----------------| B:-----4---4---4|-------4---4---4|-------4---4---4| G:---5---5---5--|-----5---5---5--|-----5---5---5--| D:-3------------|-3--------------|----------------| A:--------------|---4------------|-4--------------| E:--------------|----------------|---4------------| e:-----| B:-----| G:-----| D:-----| A:-----| E:-4p3-| And here comes a rough shape of the "chorus". e:-------------------|--------------------------| B:---------12--12--12|--------------------------| G:-------13--13--13--|---------------13--13--13-| D:-11>11-------------|-11-11-------11--11--11---| A:-------------------|-------12>12--------------| E:-------------------|--------------------------| e:-------------------------| B:---------------12--12--12| G:-------------------------| D:-------------11--11--11--| A:-12-12-------------------| E:-------12>12-------------| -Bridge- e:----------------------------------| B:----------------------------------| G:----------------------------------| D:----------------------------------| A:----------------------------------| E:-12--12>13t--13--13p11>11t--11-12t| Here's my e-mail-address: merlins_apprentice@angelfire.com